diff --git a/content/details/02_top b/content/details/02_top
index 48bce20..aaf8b2e 100644
--- a/content/details/02_top
+++ b/content/details/02_top
@@ -1,31 +1,34 @@
What does the CryptoBox do?
Usually all your files like phone numbers, love letters, bank
- account data etc. are stored in plaintext on your computers
- harddisk. All the data is accessable by anyone who has access to the
- harddisk. This is very bad in case someone you don't trust has
- your harddisk. E.g. a thief that steals your notebook, or breaks
- in your house or company. If the thief has your disk he/she can
- also read all the files that where saved on it, no matter if you
- have a login password - the files are always stored in
- plaintext.
+ account data etc. are stored in plaintext on your computer's
+ harddisk.
+ All the data is accessible for everyone who has access to the harddisk.
+ This is very bad in case someone you don't trust gets your harddisk.
+ E.g. a thief that steals your notebook, or breaks into your house or company.
+ If the thief has your disk he/she can also read all the files that
+ where saved on it, no matter whether you have a login password or not -
+ the files are always stored in plaintext.
+
-
The CryptoBox brings easy to use data encryption to your
- computer. This works out of the box and doesn't need complicated
+
The CryptoBox brings easy-to-use data encryption to your
+ computer. This works out of the box and does not need complicated
configuration steps.
-
Here comes a small usage example for the CryptoBox with a discarded
- PC as fileserver:
+
Here comes a small usage example for the CryptoBox with an obsolete
+ PC as a fileserver:
-
You boot up the old PC with the CryptoBox live-CD. After the
- completed boot process you can access it with your browser via
- network. Then you partition and reformat the harddisk of the old
+
Boot up the old PC with the CryptoBox live-CD.
+ Now you can access it with your browser via the network.
+ Then you partition and reformat the harddisk of the old
PC with encryption support. Therefore you provide a passphrase.
- This is all done through the user friendly webinterface. You can
- also plug in an external harddisk and use this for encrypted data
- storage. Afterwards you copy your sensitive data over the local
- network to the CryptoBox. It is stored on its harddisk in a
- secure way. Nobody can access the data, without giving the right
- passphrase before.
+ This is all done through the user friendly webinterface.
+ You can also plug in an external harddisk and use this to store
+ your encrypted data.
+ Afterwards you copy your sensitive data over the local
+ network to the CryptoBox.
+ It is stored on its harddisk in a secure way.
+ Nobody can access your data without the right passphrase.
+
diff --git a/content/details/05_left b/content/details/05_left
index adeb203..07ca9d8 100644
--- a/content/details/05_left
+++ b/content/details/05_left
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
-
Miss your language?
-
The CryptoBox is very extensible with plugins. It also has
- multi language support. You can help us with some
+
Missing your language?
+
The CryptoBox is easily extensible via plugins. It also has
+ support for multiple languages. You can help us with some
translations.
@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@
You are server admin?
Take a look at the README
- file. There you find more detailed information on
- installation and configuration of the CryptoBox server
+ file. There you find more detailed information about the
+ installation and configuration of the CryptoBox-Server
package.
diff --git a/content/details/10_content b/content/details/10_content
index 4bca303..a955816 100644
--- a/content/details/10_content
+++ b/content/details/10_content
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-
Requirements CryptoBox live-CD
+
Requirements for the CryptoBox live-CD
The CryptoBox live-CD runs on any x86 compatible PC with:
- CPU: min. 100MHz
@@ -8,44 +8,44 @@
- a network connection
- a harddisk for your data
-
The harddisk doesn't need to be build inside the CryptoBox. You
- can run the live-CD and use external devices only like USB-drives. All
- drives supported by the Linux kernel (2.6.12) can be used: IDE,
+
The harddisk does not need to inside the of CryptoBox computer. You
+ can also use external devices like USB-drives.
+ All drives supported by the Linux kernel (2.6.20) can be used: IDE,
SCSI, USB, FireWire, SATA, RAID, ...
Because of the high number of different supported storage media
- we call an encrypted disk a volume. This includes for
- example: USB-sticks, firewire-disks, flash-drives, digital cameras,
+ we call an encrypted disk a volume.
+ This includes (e.g.): USB-sticks, firewire-disks, flash-drives, digital cameras,
MP3-player, MMC/SD-cards.
-
Requirements CryptoBox-server
-
The CryptoBox-server package can be installed on every system with at least:
+
Requirements of the CryptoBox-Server
+
The CryptoBox-Server package can be installed on any system with at least:
- Linux kernel 2.6
- cryptsetup with LUKS support
- kernel support for the crypt target of the device mapper
- Python 2.4
-
In principle a server package should run on any Linux
- distribution, but we just provide Debian packages. So you have to
+
In general a server package should run on any Linux
+ distribution, but we only provide Debian packages. So you have to
install the necessary files on your own to the right places if
- you're using another package management system like rpm.
+ you are using a different linux distribution.
File access
-
Once you openend an encrypted volume through the webfronted of
- the CryptoBox you can access the volumes data in your local
- network via:
+
Once you openend an encrypted volume through the web frontend of
+ the CryptoBox you can access the volume's data within your local
+ network via:
- Samba shares (also known as: windows network share)
-
The CryptoBox-server package will smoothly integrate into your existing
- fileserver. It provides mount points which can be shared with your
- favourite applications (e.g.: WebDAV or NFS).
+
The CryptoBox-Server package will smoothly integrate into your existing
+ fileserver. It provides mount points which can be shared via your
+ favourite protocols (e.g.: WebDAV or NFS).
diff --git a/content/download/10_center b/content/download/10_center
index efc6069..e48a3b0 100644
--- a/content/download/10_center
+++ b/content/download/10_center
@@ -12,20 +12,20 @@
CryptoBox-Server Debian package
Install the CryptoBox-Server package in your Debian/Ubuntu Linux distribution.
-
download CryptoBox-Server
+
download CryptoBox-Server debian package
Then install it: dpkg -i cryptobox-server.deb
We strongly recommend to use the server package of our
- (inofficial) debian package repository, which comes in handier. Read
more ...
CryptoBox-Server source files
-
As user of a non-debian-based Linux distribution you're a bit
+
Users of a non-debian-based Linux distributions are a bit
out of luck. You may try to install the source package, but you
- have to adapt some pathes manally.
-
download cryptobox-server.tar.gz
+ have to adapt some paths manually.
+
download cryptobox-server source archive
diff --git a/content/faq/02_top b/content/faq/02_top
index ef13a32..9e64df9 100644
--- a/content/faq/02_top
+++ b/content/faq/02_top
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
FAQ
-
Do you have any questions or problems?
+ Do you have any questions or problems?
+
- Read the
documentation.
- Read the FAQ below.
@@ -10,6 +11,6 @@
- If you think you found a bug submit a bug report.
- Any questions left? Send a mail to %(mailaddress)s!
-
+
diff --git a/content/faq/05_left b/content/faq/05_left
index cfe58a0..717f6f0 100644
--- a/content/faq/05_left
+++ b/content/faq/05_left
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
via
preferences. What is it good for?
How do I use the server package from
- the Debian Repository?
+ the Debian repository?
diff --git a/content/faq/10_center b/content/faq/10_center
index 7f28b02..50f5dde 100644
--- a/content/faq/10_center
+++ b/content/faq/10_center
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
file for the MountDir setting. Publish this directory via your
favourite fileserver (e.g. samba, webdav, nfs, ftp, ...) and tell your
users how to reach it.
- CryptoBox-CD: browse the network neighborhood for the CryptoBox server
+
CryptoBox-CD: browse the network neighborhood for the CryptoBox-Server
(windows), scan the network (KDE or Gnome) or type something like the
following into your favourite terminal to mount a volume:
smbmount //IP_OF_CRYPTOBOX/VOLUME_NAME /media/FOO
@@ -44,12 +44,15 @@
-
How do I use the server package from the Debian Repository?
-
The CryptoBox server package is not in the official Debian
- Repository, for now. But you can use our Repository for the installation.
-
First add the following to your "/etc/apt/sources.list":
-
deb http://systemausfall.org/toolforge/debian unstable
- main
-
Second run:
apt-get update && apt-get install
- cryptobox-server
+
How do I use the server package from the Debian repository?
+
The CryptoBox-Server package is not part of the official Debian
+ repository, for now. But you can use our repository for the installation.
+
+ - Add the following to your "/etc/apt/sources.list":
+
deb http://systemausfall.org/toolforge/debian unstable
+ main
+ - Run:
apt-get update && apt-get install
+ cryptobox-server
+
+
diff --git a/content/support/10_center b/content/support/10_center
index 6ee322e..71472a4 100644
--- a/content/support/10_center
+++ b/content/support/10_center
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
file for the MountDir setting. Publish this directory via your
favourite fileserver (e.g. samba, webdav, nfs, ftp, ...) and tell your
users how to reach it.
- CryptoBox-CD: browse the network neighborhood for the CryptoBox server
+
CryptoBox-CD: browse the network neighborhood for the CryptoBox-Server
(windows), scan the network (KDE or Gnome) or type something like the
following into your favourite terminal to mount a volume:
smbmount //IP_OF_CRYPTOBOX/VOLUME_NAME /media/FOO